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3/19/2025 for Write Seven Beautiful Lines with a Twist Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

By my garden gate, I pick, for her, one rose - and mutter, "what will two shy eyes disclose? If, like light and shadow, they're three times, blinking, I'll not go to earth's four corners for an inkling, or five star points, to fetch a jewel, twinkling, or catch six snowflake-sides-a-sprinkling. At the seven-colored rainbow's end, will her nose be wrinkling?"

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Date: 3/24/2025 2:42:00 AM
- Love it :))) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, David :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 3/24/2025 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! :-)
Date: 3/20/2025 3:50:00 PM
Love you humor Dave! GL :)
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David Crandall
Date: 3/20/2025 9:32:00 PM
Thanks - I may need some!

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