Hathor Ammutlinra Poet Haiku

Like a God

~                                                  Egyptian Curse                                                 ~

~                                                 the swift air above                                             ~
~                                           heaven drift upon blue sky                                         ~
~                                                like a Cow Goddess                                              ~


~                                                (Ammut~Lin~Ra)                                                 ~

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Skat A November 19, 2015 at 9:06 PM Reminds me of a Human wearing a cow on the head. LOL

Poet Destroyer A December 11, 2013 at 1:35 AM Like a God :-)

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2011 at 10:31 PM oh, gosh, I already met you and did comment on this one before.I didn't mean anything bad by saying your poem read like haiku. It was a compiment becuase they are both asian forms and so I think it would be good for it to sound like haiku. I am such an addict. someone needs to shoot me because I can't stop coming back when i see comments showing up in my hotmail box. Just be glad I have not posted all the poems I ever wrote. That would take 40 pages iinstead of 10!!BYE

Kash Poet January 14, 2011 at 10:25 PM This is a wonderful Haiku Lin-Ra!Enjoyed-thanks a lot for your inspiring words.Don't know how I missed your poems !Nice to read your poems-kashinath

James Marshall Goff January 14, 2011 at 9:52 PM wow!....Ammut Lin Ra.....poetic cultural magnificence!!!! jimbo

Gert W. Knop January 9, 2011 at 9:20 AM Nice tribute to ancient Egyptian Gods, Lin-Ra! Enjoyed the read today!...And thank you for your comment on "Snowfall"...Have a nice week ahead...Gert

David Smalling December 27, 2010 at 7:52 AM Hathor, cloud like dreams can become anything ... truly only a god has that power. Peace and love.

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2010 at 9:47 PM I remember this one and I see my comment below. So I HAVE met you already. I'm the one with the Ghost that Travels Far (the fog poem!) Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 16, 2010 at 12:21 AM Very interesting haiku you have here Ammut Lin Ra-- I do think your choice of words here also gives a sense of gracefulness-- very nice-- nikko :)

Royal Trevino November 13, 2010 at 1:36 AM To be a goddes means the worship of life. =(^.^)= Royal

Joyce Johnson November 12, 2010 at 1:08 PM iI don't understand this one but that is just me. Hope to see more of your writing. Thank you for commenting and letting me find you. Love, joyce

Doris Culverhouse November 12, 2010 at 10:53 AM cow goddess? hope she can't fly....

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 12, 2010 at 10:32 AM Cloud watching is a favorite activity for me:)

Sara Kendrick November 11, 2010 at 4:29 AM Interesting turn in this one..Reminds of funny poem that I read years ago..Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2010 at 3:54 PM Very interesting one, Hathor.Why is this an Egyptian curse? Oh, on the Ghost that travels far. It is the personification of something in nature and which occurs once in a while in almost any place. Can you guess what it is?

Wilma Neels November 10, 2010 at 10:41 AM Awesome write Hathor. Welcome to Poetry soup ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 9, 2010 at 8:14 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your very creative write tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta November 9, 2010 at 12:31 PM What a meaningful thought of Egyptian curse you have penned so well, Hathor