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Like a Frog

up here it's foggy, you know. chaotic place of pure collision. here things converge for uncomfortable situations, broh. what seems legitimate loses its strength and will compose the broth of failures. what emerges from the fog insists on setting a new standard just to quickly submerge splashing in the mud like a frog replaced by another misguided orientation. I already asked the brain: Isn't it time to shut up? just let the body express itself even if it isn't bright, who knows in his mistakes he can finally get it right...

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/1/2022 5:41:00 PM

Interesting, Marco. I enjoyed it. Beware of "it's" and "its." Tricky, eh? "It's" is not possessive. It's a contraction for "it is." I do like your ingenious style.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/1/2022 7:43:00 PM

I understand perfectly, Marco. I speak Spanish and a smattering of French, but I never had opportunity to learn Portuguese. I understand it is similar to Spanish. I would love to explore it.

Marco Chies
Date: 3/1/2022 6:35:00 PM

Each language has its pitfalls, thank you very much for pointing out this error. My native language is Portuguese and writing in English becomes a challenge as I can't play most of the verbal games I normally do in my native language.