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Like a Father in Endless Space

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This poem is part of a story of two friends that found love, had a family then part of that family died in a traject accident then found solace in a dream.

A feather falling, floating, following my life in endless space Meeting sunsets on oceans in pinks, reds and delicious orange spread across horizons Passing in slow motion as birds squawk goodbye flapping wing Red skies this morning my heart pounds to a quick Anxiety runs, fleeing from memories where you held me like a stuffed toy cuddled A future we thought we knew blew across my face spilling wet grief The course of love like jewels fallen from heaven meet the ground Treasures buried in sightless time My heart was a gift without threads to mend it I knew you with a touch in waves moments that defined us In a tragic second shadowed memories my gift my grief Our children at hand kissing your passing in love with trembling emotions Your ghost haunts my life, floating like a falling feather in endless space

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