Moon Flower Poet Tanka

Like a Bee In a Bottle

Every resonance

that seems to bring into life

It makes one's being

a likely confounded mind

yet leavens its fleshliness


03/25/16

Note: 

* "Like a bee in a bottle"
is an idiomatic expression of 
resonance

*Thus, this poem has something
to do with the law of resonance

4th placer in a contest (April 23, 2016)

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Beautiful Scars April 26, 2016 at 2:59 PM Moon Flower, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Moon Flower May 2, 2016 at 6:49 AM Thank you so much Luloo!

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2016 at 6:36 PM Moon Flower, congratulations on the win. Linda Moon Flower April 25, 2016 at 11:37 PM Thank you, Linda. :)

Teddy Kimathi April 25, 2016 at 3:26 AM Congrats Moon Flower, for your WIN with this spiritual verse!!! ;-) Moon Flower April 25, 2016 at 4:01 AM I like what you said "spiritual verse" when it is supposed to be related to music directly. However, yes, this is somewhat related to something spiritual. Thanks for dropping by and for the kind comment. ;)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2016 at 10:34 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Moon.. Moon Flower April 24, 2016 at 10:53 PM Congrats as well. Thanks for dropping by and the kind words.

Sandra Haight April 24, 2016 at 8:44 AM Moon Flower, congratulations on your win in the contest with your profound Tanka. Hugs, Sandra Moon Flower April 24, 2016 at 9:15 AM Thank you for the kind words, Sandra. :) Hugs

Rob Carmack April 23, 2016 at 9:43 PM I like your style. Thank you for supporting my contest and congrats to you. Moon Flower April 24, 2016 at 9:05 AM Thank you too for showcasing your contest and the winners. More power. :)

Charmaine Chircop March 25, 2016 at 3:41 PM Love your tanka Moon Flower. Moon Flower March 25, 2016 at 10:10 PM Thank you, Charmaine. :)