Lightweight

Breed bigger sun's
and intensify an immaculate rising
Plow the ground for sunray seedlings;
pedals of light breaking ground 
to get milk from ultraviolet bosoms,
lactating lessons of rising
and the etiquette of a horizon…
looks like the ocean swallows you,
but the moon follows
reflecting off of a garden of stars;
dreams ripened for harvesting

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Date: 12/1/2019 11:59:00 AM
I just love this. So good to see you writing more here :) Hoop jou naweek was 'n goeie een!
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Date: 11/21/2019 11:39:00 AM
nice use of words my friend, i think this is the loveliest poem you have written.. yes it is so lightweight... and great use of vocabulary.... stunning imagery in those last few words..
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Vegter Papyrus
Date: 11/21/2019 2:10:00 PM
A wow moment for me. I appreciate it...Thanks bard!
Date: 11/21/2019 9:15:00 AM
Amen!
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Date: 11/21/2019 2:10:00 PM
I second that...
Date: 11/19/2019 7:54:00 AM
Great imagery my friend. I hope your harvest exceeds expectations. Blessings brother.
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Vegter Papyrus
Date: 11/21/2019 8:55:00 AM
And the same to you, Richard. Palms up to catch the blessings we've prayed for.
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