Lightweight

Breed bigger sun's
and intensify an immaculate rising
Plow the ground for sunray seedlings;
pedals of light breaking ground 
to get milk from ultraviolet bosoms,
lactating lessons of rising
and the etiquette of a horizon…
looks like the ocean swallows you,
but the moon follows
reflecting off of a garden of stars;
dreams ripened for harvesting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Neels Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:59 AM
I just love this. So good to see you writing more here :) Hoop jou naweek was 'n goeie een!
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November 21, 2019 at 11:39 AM
nice use of words my friend, i think this is the loveliest poem you have written.. yes it is so lightweight... and great use of vocabulary.... stunning imagery in those last few words..
Papyrus Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 2:10 PM
A wow moment for me. I appreciate it...Thanks bard!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Amen!
Papyrus Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 2:10 PM
I second that...
Lamoureux Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Great imagery my friend. I hope your harvest exceeds expectations. Blessings brother.
Papyrus Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:55 AM
And the same to you, Richard. Palms up to catch the blessings we've prayed for.
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