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Breed bigger sun's and intensify an immaculate rising Plow the ground for sunray seedlings; pedals of light breaking ground to get milk from ultraviolet bosoms, lactating lessons of rising and the etiquette of a horizon… looks like the ocean swallows you, but the moon follows reflecting off of a garden of stars; dreams ripened for harvesting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/1/2019 11:59:00 AM
I just love this. So good to see you writing more here :) Hoop jou naweek was 'n goeie een!
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Date: 11/21/2019 11:39:00 AM
nice use of words my friend, i think this is the loveliest poem you have written.. yes it is so lightweight... and great use of vocabulary.... stunning imagery in those last few words..
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Vegter Papyrus
Date: 11/21/2019 2:10:00 PM
A wow moment for me. I appreciate it...Thanks bard!
Date: 11/21/2019 9:15:00 AM
Amen!
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Vegter Papyrus
Date: 11/21/2019 2:10:00 PM
I second that...
Date: 11/19/2019 7:54:00 AM
Great imagery my friend. I hope your harvest exceeds expectations. Blessings brother.
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Vegter Papyrus
Date: 11/21/2019 8:55:00 AM
And the same to you, Richard. Palms up to catch the blessings we've prayed for.

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