Light's Effusion

Light splashes my eyes as the moon seems to sense
I’m here. Effusion  shows me its suspense
And its divine effect on me. Is my love seeing it too,
As it grips us, traps us, deep in effervescent blue?
When I think of Hanukah, and all it means to me.
Eventually I’ll realize my inner dreams. Will he?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mandani Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 2:03 PM
This is good. I WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR. AND HAPPY HANUKAH.
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..I feel that it has a religious meaning..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest James. Love Carol
A  Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 7:58 PM
nice win~SKAT
Gildersleeve Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 7:41 AM
James congratulation on your winning light. connie
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 6:41 AM
Goodmorning James, Thanks so much for writing for my contest! Congrad's on your winnning entry. And I SO love it was about Hanukah..Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 1:54 AM
Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 1:46 AM
Congratulations on your win friend James. cheers!!! Maria
Gasun Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 10:36 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, James! love/hugs, Leonora
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December 4, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Congratulations James xx
Nair Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 6:20 PM
Wonderfulwrite, Congrats!! Jag
A   Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 4:46 PM
James, , ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
A   Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 8:07 PM
James, you will pull through this dream... some hole to fall in... love the light and moon sense... xox~pd
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