Lightning Striking the Same Place Twice

very
scary

lightning
striking 

strikes twice? 
no dice 

same place? 
don't brace 

perchance? 
fat chance 

no way,
jose.



Date written: 06/12/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Very original and effectively written Edward. Congratulations on your win. Hope all is well with your family! Blessings and prayers!
Volumes Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 8:02 AM
A deserved win.. I loved this one, so glad it was awarded a well deserved win. Congratulations.
Ibeh Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Thanks again, SV:-) Most obliged.
Volumes Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Could be better? No way, Jose
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:14 AM
Thanks for the visit, SV:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 10:09 AM
A fun write. I know someone it hit and they lived. Enjoy your day..............
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Thanks for the visit, Paula:-) How fortunate to survive a lightning strike! I hope he/she has recovered. Enjoy your day as well!
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