Lightning Strikes

Dark forboding Sky 
Looms over the quiet earth
Lightning strikes its prey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Agustin Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 1:45 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 25, 2016 at 6:52 PM
VALERIE, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
Anish Avatar
July 10, 2008 at 6:23 PM
Fine haiku. You can almost see the stormclouds. Matthew Anish
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