Nette Onclaud Poet Diamante

Lightning

LIGHTNING

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lightning
electric, frantic,
crackling, zooming, glaring
howls, high-voltage, winds, mystery
foreboding, haunting, scheming
creepy, shady
omen



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Contest: Dane  Ann Smith- Johnsen
Delving into Diamantes
By: nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 12, 2012 at 9:56 AM I am so thrilled to be able to read some of your amazing poetry today Nette. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I will be back another day to read through more of your poetry. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey November 29, 2011 at 7:36 PM Excellent approach from a "bad" omen through to an electrifying lightning! You put the two together sophisticated like and brilliantly given an air of detail, pleasant to read and to understand poetically! Thank you for giving us a perfect poem!! Honorable Work!!

Joe Maverick November 29, 2011 at 4:35 PM Well diplayed words here Nette,enjoyed your 'vision within the form..

Kash Poet November 28, 2011 at 6:56 PM A "lightning" Diamante from you Nette.Best wishes.

John Rhinem November 28, 2011 at 6:48 PM Sooo Spoooky * Shiver Me Timbers * John!:) ˜