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Lighting Up the Sky

summer twilight night lightning bugs flitting presence~ shooting stars in haste 5/7/2020 A Haiku With Movement - Nature Themed Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2020 6:28:00 PM

good entry!! I love fireflies. They don't have them in Utah.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/7/2020 7:32:00 PM

How lovely that reads... Good luck in the contest Take care ... Shirley

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/7/2020 3:58:00 PM

Very nicely done. I hope its a winner. Thank you for commenting on my Farmer Joe. He was a great daddy and I love writing about him. Love, Joyce

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/7/2020 2:46:00 PM

I can't wait; especially after this taste ~x

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/7/2020 1:27:00 PM

That's right, mate! Aloha! Rico

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/7/2020 8:12:00 AM

You do justice to short forms. Being a bit verbose, I tend to stay away from the form. It takes great talent to convey thought and emotion in just a few short lines. Hugs Rick.