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Lighting Bugs

Lantern tail poets,
Writing poems in the sky:
Balmy night stanzas.

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Timothy Hicks

March 10, 2013 at 4:16 AM

Someone has been staring at fireflies far too long! Lol... I kid. It's a cool concept I think. We spend a great deal of time writing poems about the beauty of nature. But what if the animals are writing poems about us? I mean why not? This is why I read haiku... to be taken to familiar places that somehow feel new again. Well penned!

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2012 at 4:52 PM

wow, here is a haiku I somehow missed of yours. Love how you made it a reference to poetry.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 26, 2011 at 7:04 PM

Raul, the Haiku Sensei has done it again. I have replied to Your Soup Mail Thank-you.. .kenny

December 5, 2011 at 8:02 PM

Wonderful use of imagery in this poem. Hope things have been going well for you. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas! Blessings, Karen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

November 29, 2011 at 8:47 PM

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