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Lighting Bugs

Lantern tail poets, Writing poems in the sky: Balmy night stanzas.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2013 4:16:00 AM

Someone has been staring at fireflies far too long! Lol... I kid. It's a cool concept I think. We spend a great deal of time writing poems about the beauty of nature. But what if the animals are writing poems about us? I mean why not? This is why I read haiku... to be taken to familiar places that somehow feel new again. Well penned!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 4:52:00 PM

wow, here is a haiku I somehow missed of yours. Love how you made it a reference to poetry.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/26/2011 7:04:00 PM

Raul, the Haiku Sensei has done it again. I have replied to Your Soup Mail Thank-you.. .kenny

Date: 12/5/2011 8:02:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery in this poem. Hope things have been going well for you. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas! Blessings, Karen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/29/2011 8:47:00 PM

Raul, my name is Kenny Potter I am the Chef's (HG) student He is in Hospital but he has a chance to write a book that a ny publisher said they would put in print if he finishes it by March He would like your input Sharon Weimer will edit and others will also give input Carolyn Devonshire, Ruben Ortello, Andrea Dietrich,Dr. Ram Metha, the Sweetheart of Poetry Soup Linda Marie, Carol Brown, and Lady Elaine George soup mail

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/2/2011 6:00:00 PM

A beauty.. very nice description with your "lantern tail poets." BG