Lighthouse For All Souls

lighthouse for all souls. . . . 
his eye is ever watchful
guiding those who see

storms unceasingly
wreaking havoc in dark hours. . .  
hope shines up ahead

Written by Andrea Dietrich

for Russell Sivey's
In the Light of Haiku Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:39 PM
wonderful message * Forever ~SKAT~
Mister Roboto Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 4:58 AM
I swear...EVERY poem I have read of yours lately, brings songs to my head...This one="Birdhouse In Your Soul"-by TheyMightBe GIANTS!....I love that song! So does my son and my brother. Btw---I like your Hi-CHOO! Bless you!....what! Don't look at me...YOU are the one who sneezed! And Why on the High Heavens would you say I was tokin' on Lefties? Who ME? MOI---ahhh? the Great Joseppie Lambert-O. No way Jose!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Gosh, you won in so many contests I am having trouble remembering which I have made comments on. I will check them all out as time permits.
Horne Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 4:40 PM
I've read all your latest and can't see your oldies anymore : ( Thought I'd enjoy reading this one again : ) Hope you're feeling better now, my friend.
Guzzi Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Congrad's light & love
Wesley Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 7:05 PM
The deeper meaning shines through beautifully Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
Falotico Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Congrats Andrea!!! what a wonderful write and win for you.... luv Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 11:48 AM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN FOR THIS RARE BEAUTY MY FRIEND.. AMAZING AS U LUV..
Horne Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Beautiful uplifting write, Andrea
Gorelick Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Some awesome poems from this contest..yours stands out...congrats. BG
Puddifoot Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:54 PM
congrats on a great win in the contest andrea, light and hope radiate from this haiku :-)
Richards Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:41 PM
love the hopeful way this poem ends...nicely done, Andrea!
Devonshire Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Definitely one of the best I've seen for the contest, Andrea. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 3:58 PM
hey Andrea congrats on your win, enjoyed ..David
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Andrea. Love,Carol
Sivey Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:12 AM
wonderful words of hope and great message ..could pertain to the lost soul and Divine Light as well Andrea.. nice ..good luck in the contest my friend...
Horsman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 10:39 AM
this is lovely Andrea, no discrimination for the light, just love it. harry
Devonshire Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 1:42 AM
Very creative comparison of the lighthouse to God's eternal light, Andrea. Thanks for your kind words. Wishing you success in Russell's contest. He's quite a poet, isn't he? So much new talent here. Love, Carolyn
Ramsdale Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 9:37 PM
Wow, wow, wow...you and john freeman knocked this one right out of the ball park. My favorite..."his eye is ever watchful" and how it is like the lighthouse beacon...Great job. Good luck! CR
Freeman Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 7:58 PM
Beautiful metaphor Andrea. jolly good show. Thanks for comment. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 4:20 PM
Tomorrow never shows it's face. And so we live in today's grace. Amongst the oceans ebb and flow. The lighthouse shows us where to go.
Babcock Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Love this poem Andrea and his watchful eye guides us each and every day. AWESOME. love phyl
Austin Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 1:21 PM
I like your lighthouse image - lots of them in Michigan. I have lots of catching up to do. Bad cold. Love, daver
Moreno Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful haiku Andea and best of luck. -R
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