Lighthouse

Despairing sailors seek succour beneath your warm cyclopean gaze

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Benjamin Bartley

Date: 7/28/2024 10:23:00 AM

Wonderful read. Thank you for sharing.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/21/2017 9:48:00 PM

Fantastic imagery and metaphor John. Each line sparkles to create a gem of a Haiku. Beautiful my talented friend!

John Michaels
Date: 11/25/2017 7:38:00 AM

Hey, you found another of my "oldies"! Thanks for the lovely comments, Susan! All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2017 11:33:00 PM

AHA, I finally found one to see. This is very nice , the metaphor of a cyclops for that lighthouse!!

John Michaels
Date: 11/25/2017 7:39:00 AM

There are still a few floating around that you've not read yet!! Enjoy the hunt. Thanks for the comments, Andrea. Kind regards, John.