Lightening Green

Brightening captivating greenish allure
Seasonal visitor like rain drops...
Leaving me always wanting some more...
Like Oliver Twist.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/4/2010 8:19:00 AM
A cute write and you made me smile. Your writing is now getting witty. Good for you. Love mom
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Date: 12/1/2010 10:22:00 PM
by the way, that is a clever little "twist" you put at the end of this poem! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/1/2010 10:18:00 PM
soupmail, Charles
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Date: 12/1/2010 11:41:00 AM
Oh, such a delightful poem, son. Remember what happened when Oliver asked for more? I can see the vibrant green plants bringing joy to your heart in this poem. Beautifully written, dear. Love, "mom"
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:32:00 AM
Hey my friend, how are you? Hope you can write as much as you want. does the village have wireless internet? Do you teach the children? hope to talk soon.
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Date: 11/30/2010 2:16:00 AM
Who didn't love Oliver Twist?thanks for the memory,lovely poem!
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:13:00 PM
Hey, Charles. this is a fun little poem, comparing yourself to Oliver Twist. Sounds mystical! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2010 8:10:00 PM
Yes a classic Lightening Ink as Oliver Twist is.. wonderful and brilliant bright lines of your Senryu ..enjoyed tonight with luv..my friend..
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Date: 11/29/2010 2:28:00 PM
good. jhl
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:31:00 AM
Always, leaving me wanting more,,, lol,, I know some one who loves that line,, but he says,, more dots more dots.. Twist, weee.. sorry about that weee.. I love Oliver twist, by the way. OI' and I enjoyed this little write,.always your friend,..p.d.
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