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Lightening Dots Dance

Luminescent lights
bouncing through the nighttime air;
fireflies, in my yard.

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P.M. Richter

Date: 2/17/2020 9:30:00 AM

An inner and outer world experience. Bringing back childhood memories in such a perfect haiku. Thank you - Fav!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2020 9:00:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/6/2015 6:58:00 PM

A plot with a twist, I was not expecting the ending. Marvellous!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:53:00 PM

Glad you dropped by. Thanks

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/24/2015 3:10:00 PM

Is it only visual delight! You used appropriate words in the haiku. Very powerful inner meanings. It's called real magic. Best to you.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:54:00 PM

Thank you Sandip.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/25/2015 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Sandip and the best to you, also.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/24/2015 9:15:00 AM

Absolutely charming and perfect. Love, daver

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/25/2015 10:51:00 AM

Thank you, Daver.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2015 12:13:00 AM

What a visual delight this haiku shares M.L. Lovely!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/5/2015 11:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/28/2015 10:37:00 PM

I love the mysterious and wondrous fireflies. I only wish they could stay all year long... A lovely poem this is, M. L.!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/2/2015 10:43:00 AM

I love them too. They are amazing beings and a thrill to watch, still. Thanks so much for dropping by to read and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2015 10:56:00 PM

I think I saw this one before. it is pure delight to see again.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/27/2015 1:58:00 PM

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it...I can hardly wait to see those fireflies again.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/26/2015 9:23:00 AM

wow!!! you caught me with the title but more of as I read!!!//olive eloisa

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/27/2015 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Olive.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/26/2015 4:14:00 AM

a beautifully expressed haiku ML hugs 7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/27/2015 1:58:00 PM

Many thanks, Shadow.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/25/2015 11:59:00 PM

Fireflies or so amazing to watch when their out at night. 7 wonderful

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/27/2015 1:58:00 PM

Aren't they though? Many thanks for your comments.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/25/2015 4:51:00 PM

Dear M.L. KISER, Got to tell you what I can't wait to see fireflies again my instead of snowflakes, my friend great summer evening write here, And you are darn right that they do bounce around lol, thank you for your comment on my wild in America right. i was thinking about the old tv show wild kingdom when I wrote this one, cheri

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/25/2015 5:17:00 PM

I remember, "Wild Kingdom"...used to love watching that one. I too am looking forward to warmer weather and dancing fire flies.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/16/2015 12:03:00 PM

Bouncing fireflies. Aha! great haiku. Love MLK...rajat

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/17/2015 10:23:00 AM

Many thanks for your comments.

Skat A

Date: 2/14/2015 12:32:00 AM

M.L. Kiser, awesome haiku, :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/17/2015 10:24:00 AM

Thanks, I did. Hope your's was just as wonderful.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/11/2015 5:54:00 PM

a visual art indeed, ML... I saw the scene!.. beautiful!.. huggs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/17/2015 10:24:00 AM

I'm glad that it conjured the visual for you. Thanks.

Gary Bateman

Date: 2/10/2015 3:10:00 PM

ML, A most wonderful image here indeed. It's been a while since I've seen any fireflies. Warm weather will bring them. Enjoyed your Haiku here. A "7"!! Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/17/2015 10:25:00 AM

Thank you, Gary.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/9/2015 5:05:00 PM

Dear L.M. KISER Lovely old town feeling here my fellow souper, Great feeling of warmth brings back memories of my own youth. I can remember hearing the cries of the locus, and crickets in the well painted verses you've written about here. I remember being that little girl carrying that jar, thanks for the time travel, back to the time of my innocence, cheri

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/10/2015 1:41:00 PM

I am delighted that your warm memories were returned...thanks so much for stopping by to read and comment.

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/8/2015 10:47:00 AM

Your words paint the scene with a clarity that brings the essence of your experience into our conscious minds and we too can see the fireflies. Emile. #7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:51:00 AM

Aren't they beautiful? I miss them in the wintertime.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/7/2015 9:00:00 AM

I remember catching fireflys in jars when we were kids. Great Haiku!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:51:00 AM

I loved doing that. Thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2015 2:00:00 PM

- A beautiful haiku M.L. - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:53:00 AM

Thank you and I wish you the same.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/6/2015 3:05:00 AM

Heavenly beautiful, my friend M. L. KISER!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:54:00 AM

I appreciate the comments, Demetrios.

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/5/2015 9:30:00 PM

How beautiful that would be... nice one friend...nad!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:54:00 AM

I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/5/2015 8:08:00 PM

What a nice image, M.L. We have a lot of those in the summer months, and you have painted a great word picture of how they really look! Sandra

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:55:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sandra; I always enjoy them.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2015 6:37:00 PM

wonderful image!!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:55:00 AM

Many thanks.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/5/2015 5:24:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku M.L. enjoyed! Verlena

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/5/2015 5:38:00 PM

I'm glad...thanks for stopping by.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2015 5:06:00 PM

I enjoy watching fireflies like stars surrounding my yard..Creative use of this alluring bug..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/5/2015 5:39:00 PM

I loved catching them as a kid and letting them go again. They can put on quite a display. I'm glad that you stopped by.

Lightening Dots Dance

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