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Lightening

Atmospheric show Electrical veins preview Thunderous applause http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-2.php

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/29/2009 5:48:00 PM

James~ I love this very creative Haiku well done! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/17/2009 11:30:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your Magnificent poetry with us today James. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2009 10:48:00 AM

Yes, yes, electrifying imagery, James!! This is headed to my faves. Awesome work! Much love, Carolyn

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/17/2009 9:19:00 AM

Great imagery James..... New fav......:JP]

Karla Null

Date: 12/16/2009 9:41:00 PM

Three lines say so much, you nailed it... Karla

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/16/2009 5:46:00 PM

I love the last line especially! :) ~ Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/16/2009 4:44:00 PM

nicley penned, enjoyed reading.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 12/16/2009 2:13:00 PM

" Electrical veins" is brilliant! I wish that I had written that! Thank yoiu for your kind remarks. I do care about them greatly. Merry Christmas! Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2009 1:55:00 PM

Excellent show James in Haiku ... great words .. enjoyed much... SOUP MAIL ...

P Sheart

Date: 12/16/2009 12:51:00 PM

Hi James, I love this Haiku. Thunderous applause is a great line! Any poem that has nature in it is special to me. Thanks for sharing, Love Light Patty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2009 12:50:00 PM

Interesting Haiku that you have done with the lightening theme. I can see and hear the scene. Keep the magical pen flowing. Soup Mail. Sara