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Lightening


Atmospheric show
Electrical veins preview
Thunderous applause




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Laura Mckenzie

December 29, 2009 at 5:48 PM

James~ I love this very creative Haiku well done! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 17, 2009 at 11:30 AM

Thank you for sharing your Magnificent poetry with us today James. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

December 17, 2009 at 10:48 AM

Yes, yes, electrifying imagery, James!! This is headed to my faves. Awesome work! Much love, Carolyn

Jared Pickett

December 17, 2009 at 9:19 AM

Great imagery James..... New fav......:JP]

Karla Null

December 16, 2009 at 9:41 PM

Three lines say so much, you nailed it... Karla

Carrie Richards

December 16, 2009 at 5:46 PM

I love the last line especially! :) ~ Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

December 16, 2009 at 4:44 PM

nicley penned, enjoyed reading.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

December 16, 2009 at 2:13 PM

" Electrical veins" is brilliant! I wish that I had written that! Thank yoiu for your kind remarks. I do care about them greatly. Merry Christmas! Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 16, 2009 at 1:55 PM

Excellent show James in Haiku ... great words .. enjoyed much... SOUP MAIL ...

P Sheart

December 16, 2009 at 12:51 PM

Hi James, I love this Haiku. Thunderous applause is a great line! Any poem that has nature in it is special to me. Thanks for sharing, Love Light Patty