Lighted Rays

struck by lighted rays
   quivering ‘neath rotted sea....
      destruction cometh

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations Deb, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:37:00 AM

Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win, this is so well done As Always Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 4:12:00 PM

Awesomel job, Deb great to see you in the top ten, near the top! Congratulations on your worthy poems 7th place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 4:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 1:01:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:48:00 AM

Nice write deb!Congrats on your well deserved win---kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:32:00 AM

what a foreboding take on the photo, way to go, Deb -- really like this-- congrats! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:36:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/27/2011 3:17:00 AM

Wow a uniue ku. many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:27:00 PM

Deb, this one was sure unique! Glad to see you here tonight on the winners' circle. Way to go!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 9:57:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine 7th Place win in my contest, Deb. And thanks for your support. Always, Annalise

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/25/2011 5:25:00 AM

Sounds exactly like what this contest is about... best of luck my dear poet friend..luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2011 11:34:00 PM

sounds like a grave destruction indeed, deb. Is this for nature contest?

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/24/2011 8:57:00 PM

Wow What a scene.

Lighted Rays

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