Lighted Rays

struck by lighted rays
   quivering ‘neath rotted sea....
      destruction cometh

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 11:03 AM

Congratulations Deb, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 9:37 AM

Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win, this is so well done As Always Shar

John Freeman

February 27, 2011 at 4:12 PM

Awesomel job, Deb great to see you in the top ten, near the top! Congratulations on your worthy poems 7th place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 4:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 1:01 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 11:48 AM

Nice write deb!Congrats on your well deserved win---kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:32 AM

what a foreboding take on the photo, way to go, Deb -- really like this-- congrats! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:36 AM

Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..

Tahera Mannan

February 27, 2011 at 3:17 AM

Wow a uniue ku. many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2011 at 11:27 PM

Deb, this one was sure unique! Glad to see you here tonight on the winners' circle. Way to go!

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 9:57 PM

Congratulations, Deb. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

February 26, 2011 at 8:55 PM

Congratulations on your fine 7th Place win in my contest, Deb. And thanks for your support. Always, Annalise

Michael J. Falotico

February 25, 2011 at 5:25 AM

Sounds exactly like what this contest is about... best of luck my dear poet friend..luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

February 24, 2011 at 11:34 PM

sounds like a grave destruction indeed, deb. Is this for nature contest?

Tahera Mannan

February 24, 2011 at 8:57 PM

Wow What a scene.

Lighted Rays

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