Light Warm Whisper

For Nette Onclaud's Light A Pensee Poetry Contest/ posted July 27, 2026

Pensee syllable count  2/4/7/8/6: verified by HMS.COM

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faint light
with warm beacon
soft breathing fills the still room,
where our shadows reheat as one
sinking in sweet content

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sara Etgen-Baker

July 31, 2026 at 10:59 AM

wonderful image in just a few lines...especially liked: soft breathing fills the still room, Congrats on your win with this poem.

Sara Kendrick

July 30, 2026 at 1:41 PM

Back with a way to go, Lasaad, with this winning entry. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 30, 2026 at 12:25 PM

- Back with a congrats, Las :) - hugs

Howard Kerr

July 30, 2026 at 10:02 AM

Congratulations Sotto on your triumph with this exceptional verse poem. Opulent imagery and sincere context abound. I value every line but especially adore the following ; “Soft breathing fills the still room,” and of course “Where our shadows reheat as one,” are impeccable in their lyricism.. Heartfelt gratitude for your concise reflections on Light A Flame. I learn so much from your reviews. Warm wishes, Howard “

Krishnanand Guptar

July 30, 2026 at 8:54 AM

Congratulations dear poet on your win in this contest with a cute take on the prompt to create a lovely pansy with beautiful imagery with a romantic touch. Wish you a blessed day.

Karen Jones

July 30, 2026 at 7:57 AM

Love those last two lines. So soothingly romantic. Congratulations on your win!

Christine Watts

July 30, 2026 at 2:40 AM

Hi Sotto A nicely penned Pensee with gentle meaning Congratulations Cheers Christine

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 29, 2026 at 2:30 PM

This is a gorgeous verse, Sotto! I love it! Good luck in the contest.

Hiya Sharma

July 29, 2026 at 6:40 AM

"soft breathing fills the still room, where our shadows reheat as one" Wow, dear Sotto! How profound, unique and whimsical is that, the way you've created a very intriguing atmosphere that feels so intricately filled with warmth ahh.. the light of love can surely be felt! So beautifully done. Best wishes to you in the contest ~ keep writing and shining.