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Light Vs Dark

When reckoning skies loom in ashen flecks, embers of flames bleed repressed rays, and demons of disgrace clamor, like wailing wind against the eclipsed dark. For light in all its glory is the true monster disguised in luminous moonrise.

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Nik Canada7

Date: 11/6/2023 4:23:00 AM

I love this so much amore?your deep intense show me your depth within your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. You are a rare special being and i will always be by your side being your everything walking hand in hand towards amidst the life storms and gravitational current,illuminanting your soul, feeling your sorrow,my korean princess. mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio. i love you deeply micia ..mia passione per sempre ..tuo..il nostro eterno amore

Ink Empress

Date: 11/5/2023 10:28:00 PM

This is a very interesting concept and way of thinking my beautiful soul sis! Its weighs so deep and heavy and makes me ponder too, maybe light can be deceitful and in times of light sometimes we forget to praise the lord and be thankful, so darkness comes as saving grace or light that guides u back to the right, if that makes sense? Thats how I perceived this, I absolutely love your last line! It should be a quote! Your way with words is impeccable! So powerful and soul stirring! Pleasure readn

Fading Star Silence
Date: 11/5/2023 10:44:00 PM

Exactly!!! What you said! I’m also pondering more on this. I find it so intriguing and it makes sense! You always capture the essence of my words perfectly! Yes, light can be deceitful, and we do forget to praise the lord..and what do we have left? I feel a world of hate, pain and deep wounds..we need to be guided back to what made the light, the light. It absolutely makes sense! Or maybe light had always been the dark? Thank you so much my beautiful soul sis for your wise and divine words!! I always love pondering with you! Hehe