Light the Dark, Darken the Light

His aurora is wrong
His emotions tells me that something is wrong
When I ask
He slams the door
While I stand in the rain as it covers my tears

I wonder so much about him
He’s in my mind every second I live
He’s the reason why I haven’t died yet
He’s the hope that lights up the dark tunnel that I chose to lay in

I stare at him
With his gloomy out look
I leave for a bit
Behind me I hear laughing
I turn to him
He’s the only one laughing
With his smile that brightens the room
His warmth makes me wonder

Am I the dark that covers the light?
While he’s the light that brightens my dark?

My emotions burns up like fire burning a building
My mind spins like I am on a tilt-a-whirl for an eternity

What should I do?
Leave him forever
Never speak to him
Or be with him as long as destiny lets us be together

I don’t want to leave him
But I don’t want to cause him to never see the light again?
So I choose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/23/2009 11:45:00 PM
Cryatal, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:52:00 PM
Congrats Crystal on being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 5/23/2009 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, James
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/19/2009 12:23:00 PM
Congrats to you on your feature poem this week, well done! Rgds, E
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:21:00 AM
Crystal, congratulations, more power and success with your poetry. Welcome to the soupland. Ernilando
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Date: 5/17/2009 4:54:00 PM
This poem portrays the complexity of relationships. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 5/7/2009 8:13:00 PM
Complexities of relationships. Is he truly light or does he have darkness in his soul. Are you in darkness because he refuses to share his light? I liked what you did with the shades of emotions and metaphors of life.
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