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Light of My Life

She who is the sun She lights my days and my nights She who is the moon

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2011 5:14:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cole. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Cole Jackson

Date: 2/28/2011 6:12:00 PM

Thank you all for the positive feedback! This is actually my first poem that I wrote for my girlfriend.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 4:25:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 6:05:00 AM

Extraordinary feelings, Cole

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/27/2011 10:12:00 PM

Nice write Cole. You have described the sun and moon as if they were women, and you have done it well.