Light of My Life

She who is the sun She lights my days and my nights She who is the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 5:14 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cole. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
Jackson Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Thank you all for the positive feedback! This is actually my first poem that I wrote for my girlfriend.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Extraordinary feelings, Cole
Pettit Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Nice write Cole. You have described the sun and moon as if they were women, and you have done it well.
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