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Light of Heaven

Light of Heaven ~~~ Oh light of heaven, lifting light of mine In early seven, I felt your salient shine Thru windows pane, and morning mist Within love of radiant reign, you did exist ~~~ Surrounding showers with luminescence Admits paradisal powers until adolescence Lyrical living light of magical morning sun With squinting eyesight, thy will was done ~~~ Now the present day I wait for your return Old and grey my heart will always yearn. April.22.2018 AN EARLY CHILDHOOD MEMORY ANY RHYME FORM Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/8/2018 10:15:00 AM
An exquisite voyage ignited by "Light Of Heaven"! I got the vivid and amazing image conveyed by well chosen refined wording.. A joy to read your piece of work! Stay bright and blessed Winged Warrior.
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, ^WW^, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:58:00 PM
Wonderful WW. Love the brilliant use of alliteration. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/25/2018 2:20:00 PM
Just beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:30:00 AM
Beautifully crafter, WW. Congrats on your much deserved silver medal win.
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Date: 4/25/2018 6:16:00 AM
Aw, beautiful, congratulations on your 2nd place WW, Mick
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Date: 4/23/2018 12:06:00 PM
Hello Winged - This is poetically beautiful. It is smooth in its alignment rhyme and theme. Best of luck with the contest.
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Date: 4/23/2018 7:03:00 AM
Beautiful, ^WW^. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/22/2018 10:36:00 AM
Beautifully written WW! I love it. Good luck in the contest! :)
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