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Light of Death

Light of Death
please shoot your fire arrow, break my breast and take the dying poison from my chest then bring your black, remove my painful sight I plead remove this light, I will not fight black clouds of thunder bring your ragged knife cut through the silver lining of my life cancer the light from this bright burning day just spread the black over my bed and stay cold pain my escort, time for us to end a cut so quick, so long my faithful friend the storm inside has come to rest in me my river meets its fall, and now it’s free black is the night and cold the hard ice floor love light has left and pain it is no more

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Date: 7/26/2016 7:04:00 AM
Congrats James, for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Just James
Date: 7/26/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Teddy
Date: 7/25/2016 4:09:00 PM
many congrats on your win James I am not good at Iambic pentameter and shy away from writing this form:-( hugs Jan xx
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Just James
Date: 7/26/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Jan!
Date: 7/25/2016 3:35:00 PM
Congrats! my friend James...superbly done...god bless...^WW^
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Just James
Date: 7/26/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thank you "Warrior"!
Date: 7/25/2016 3:23:00 PM
Your acceptance and pain are presented very well in this write, James. It's really very good.
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Just James
Date: 7/26/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Lin!

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