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Light of Day

Back rubs are given, pills have been handed out, Patients settled, some won’t sleep, I have no doubt, Fear paralyzing their being when darkness falls, If they close their eyes, will night terrors sprout. Night lights shed a little peace over their bed, The medication eases the pain or so they’ve said, Someone to sit by their side would ease the fear, They worry, wanting to awake, not ending up dead. For they know that death will come, it’s not far off, They work to breathe, chest heavy, the rattled cough, Sunlight drifts in the window, another day, more life, Eyes slowly open, blackness gone, at death they scoff.
Written September 23, 2012 For Craig Cornish’s contest “Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/5/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest Lee. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2012 7:43:00 AM
wow, this is one of the best ones I've read on the list. I just love how you did this with so much humanity involved in the poem. It's about much more than the night!! Congrats on your win. a FAVE.
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/3/2012 12:44:00 PM
You are so kind, thank you, but it is an honour to be able to be with my patients who are dying. Lee
Date: 10/3/2012 6:18:00 AM
Emotional this one Lee, well done and congratulations
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:31:00 PM
Devasting and beautiful, Lee...My thought is that dying is easy...SUFFERING and dying is far different...it's among everyone's worst fears, I believe...Congratulations - Tim
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/2/2012 8:37:00 PM
Thank you Tim, it is my honour to be present to sit, listen and care for my dying patients. Lee
Date: 10/2/2012 1:12:00 PM
LEE :-) A wonderful congratulations in Craig's "Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad" contest. Nice reading and supporting all his winners. have a nice and wonderful day, *PD
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:50:00 AM
i love the emotion in your words, lee!.. sending my congrats to you!..:) huggs!
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:23:00 AM
nice poem...congratulations on ur win...:)))
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:05:00 PM
awesome poem friend Lee. Congratulations on your win. cheers!! have a good day always!! (^_^)
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:55:00 PM
Very nice poem... Congratulations on your win!! Terry
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