Sandra Hudson Poet Lanterne

" Light " My Flier

.                                                                Feast
                                                               Godlike
                                                           Clear nectar-
                                                          Birdie’s Brandy
                                                               Sipped
                                                                 Hot!!
                                                              Trumpet
                                                           Scarlet sage-
                                                        A Hummingbird’s
                                                               Pepper
                                                                Fuels
                                                              Physics
                                                          Married pair-
                                                      Same ruby throats
                                                              Burned

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July 14, 2009 at 10:34 PM Interesting lanterne series with creative use of imagery. Nice job! Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Brian Strand June 30, 2009 at 2:48 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Sandra Rgds Brian

Hyle Chu June 29, 2009 at 9:42 PM For some reason, I'm thirsty.

Christopher Higgins June 29, 2009 at 7:48 PM This is lovely writing my friend..I love how it goes down smoothly as I read it.....very nice.

Constance La France June 29, 2009 at 7:32 PM nice poem... the hummingbird is my favourite of birds.. in answer to your question, my poem is mostly spiritual, I call to the dragon my power animal, I am a strong woman, and a frightened child, in one...

James Marshall Goff June 29, 2009 at 6:22 PM yes! just a really fun poem to read filled with glorious sounding words!!!! wow Sandra! I'm impressed!! jim

Kareena Goodwin June 29, 2009 at 6:03 PM Humming birds pepper fules... niceee :-) I like this poem I'm new to the poetry soup world so if you can please read some of my work and tell me what you think. Please and thank you