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Light King

Through the mist I sense the dawn
Struggling to appear
Sun wants only to be shown
Fog erased and cleared

Floats so proudly overhead
Great majestic King
Crown of photons being shed
Powers living things

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Skat A

May 3, 2015 at 9:48 PM

Ronald, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Paul Callus

May 2, 2015 at 12:30 PM

Hi Ronald! Stopping by to have a peep after a short absence, and to give you merited congratulations on this your win. // paul

Ronald Wheeler

May 2, 2015 at 6:22 PM

Thanks Paul!

Jan Allison

May 2, 2015 at 6:58 AM

a lovely flow to your poem and lovely imagery - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ronald Wheeler

May 2, 2015 at 6:25 PM

Thanks Jan!

Andrea Dietrich

May 2, 2015 at 1:02 AM

Congrats in my 7/5 Trochee contest. A nice poem.

Skat A

May 2, 2015 at 12:39 AM

Hello Ronald, amazing imagery. This king can enter my day, any day. :) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Ronald Wheeler

May 2, 2015 at 6:26 PM

You're too kind SKAT! Thanks

Shadow Hamilton

April 18, 2015 at 9:02 AM

you do not have your mail box open on here so I am replying here. A featured poem is one that poetry soup admin have chosen. Each week they feature various poems by different poets premium and life members are featured every 3 months non members are not featured nearly as often. You will see a small box high up on left of a house click on there and scroll down to see featured poems I also suggest you open your email box do that in the members link. hugs and nice poem 7

Ronald Wheeler

April 18, 2015 at 5:13 PM

Thank you so very much Shadow! I've apparently got a lot to learn around here. I'm going to try and straighten these things out this evening. And in the meantime I look forward to taking a good look at your work!!! I'm nothing short of thrilled and amazed at the large number of both talented poets/writers, and just genuinely kind and helpful folks that I've already had the pleasure of meeting in my short time back on this site. I say "back on this site", because I put 4 or 5 poems on here around 8-9 years ago, and now I can't seem to find them for some crazy reason!?( mostly because I can't remember my user name and password....duh) lol It's pretty neat just how much Poetry Soup has evolved and thrived! Good stuff.....And thanks one more time Shadow!!! And 10, 367 HUGE HUGS BACK ATCHA kind maam!!!!! If I can ever help you in any way please just let me know.

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