Light In the Darkness

She is the illuminating candle burning within a world full darkness, but she is melting with every ounce of light she gives.

~11-22-17~
~Written for "wonderful one liners" contest 
~Sponsored by:s. grace~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal win with this amazing one-liner, Pailey.
Braaten Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Woah, this was so amazing.
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Beautifully done, Pailey, congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Scars Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 9:13 AM
oh I love this one, congrats :)-luloo
Gordon Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thank you for the kind comment! It means a lot :) ~hugs~
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