Russell Sivey Poet Ottava rima

Light Enhanced Fog

The sun slowly rises casting a glow
Wherever the fog billows light reflects
Water slushes from the unknown below
Mist wanders leaving a path for effect
Everyone can go beyond what they know
Leaving nothing of this scene to defect

Beautiful nature shows this scene lovely
Light enhanced fog brings about wistfully

Russell Sivey

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Jack Horne August 16, 2013 at 3:50 PM beautiful, Russell - I love foggy weather

Carrie Richards August 16, 2013 at 2:05 PM I can see it all as if it hangs in a gallery of beautiful art! Lovely poem !!

Carol Eastman August 16, 2013 at 9:25 AM Loved the imagery... very peaceful.

Wilma Neels August 16, 2013 at 3:34 AM Russell what a beauty this is. Love the opening line especially. You made me smile this morning. Hope you have a good day further :)

Nette Onclaud August 15, 2013 at 12:57 PM well, well, this shine with an astonishing spell of a fog, russell...it's wonderful to see feelings not only shared, but written beautifully for all to savor.. wonderful!..:) huggs

Sara Kendrick August 15, 2013 at 12:02 PM Uniquely creative work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visit to my work..I appreciate each stop there..Sara

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2013 at 6:42 AM Very nice one, Russell. you sure are getting skilled with various forms too. I think you have tried lots of great forms!

Shadow Hamilton August 15, 2013 at 6:26 AM Russell a magical pen fog is a living entity captured well by you Shadow x smiles