Light Energy

Distinctive deliverance,
Man has no abstract control.
Nature takes in importance.

Will nature, man ever collaborate.


Note Parise Pariku 


Written for
Sponsor ^Rick Parise 
Contest Name Parise Pariku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Onclaud Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 11:30 AM
we have bee unkind to mother nature, cecil.. this thought -provoking piece with highly distinctive tonality will rate real well in the contest.. much luck to you... ::) nette
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December 18, 2010 at 2:38 PM
A compelling response to the contest theme, Cecil. I too wonder if man and nature will ever learn to "collaborate." Best wishes for success with your "Pariku." Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Lovely write on the theme of light energy. Good luck. cecil
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