Light Darkens

The sun shines no more
with my eyes closed
but all i see reflects
with no light on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2009 at 11:34 AM
It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry Aminkeng. Love, Carol
Arteaga Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 11:44 PM
have you ever seen the movie the soloist? reminds of a part when he closes his eyes, very nice poem.
Burton Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 10:53 PM
sound like the things you may see when closing your eyes. Ejoyed this short poetry and enjoy your day or night.
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