Light Bursts

light bursts flaming 
on alabaster waves 
savours moment
clutching rose umbrella 
shuts eyes in ecstasy

emotionstanka

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Sam Kauffman

December 26, 2024 at 10:58 AM

Beautiful tanka, Mala! It so reflects for me the bursting joy of this Christmas season! Merry Christmas, dear friend! Sending you "bursting" joy, hugs and blessings!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

December 27, 2024 at 1:22 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Sam. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Sending you joy, love and many hugs!