Light a Match

as sharp as an axe
wielding words to burn down worlds~
           
           kinship split like wood


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Ricci Avatar
June 17, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Hi Maureen. I once again loved your title. Your words are well expressed that gives pause to the reader. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. It was a pleasure turning to your page today. I hope all is well. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessings always (smile)
Sambourne Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 5:53 PM
Splintered relationships so forcefully caught in your sharp Senryu, Maureen. Top notch writing from your creative pen. Sincerest regards, Brian
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Thank you Brian! I hope you are well :) xomo!
Zahid Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 8:43 PM
Pretty sad. But hope for the best. May the New Year bless you with health, wealth, and happiness.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Paghunda. New Year’s blessings to you and yours. Have a lovely day! xomo
Thomas Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Happens more and more these days. Powerful Mo :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Seems to! Thank you, xomo
Wolf Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 8:42 PM
Brilliant barbs of wit and fire, Maureen.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Thank you! xomo
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Some cross words can put us in the crosshairs of permanent division, impossible to patch back up to its previous state, always a suspicion remains, a great senryu Super Mo, cheers David
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Dave, cheers to you! xomo
Connelly Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 3:26 AM
I'm positively pondering this one in a positive way Maureen... Really good... Thanks
Connelly Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 5:11 AM
Always :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 6:35 PM
No, thank you my friend! ~x
Scorpio Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:14 PM
Every time I knock at your door you open a deeper expression of truth. I really like this one Maureen
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 6:34 PM
Thank you dear Scorpio! xomo
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 10:29 PM
Phew!! Split wood. Hugs.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Gotta keep warm up here ;), xomo!
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:01 AM
They say action is more powerful than words, I wonder sometimes. Glad to see your muse awakening again, Mo. Sending love...Charlie
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 9:40 AM
Words are sticky. My muse, she came out, spat this out, saw her shadow and disappeared again ;) Hugs and love your way! xomo
Rose  Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 2:49 AM
awful when that happens Maureen. People don't realize the power of words and take them way to lightly, as poets we don't, even when we pour our souls out, we know, the power of words. I love this :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 9:39 AM
Thank you lovely Mystic! xomo
Kaufman Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 2:21 PM
As always you got it girl. Thanks for your advise. I've been a touch distracted as my next door neighbor put moth balls outside and my cat is in third stage renal failure. I had to get the young one checked out. This is the price for one poop in this man's yard and his action are illegal by state and fed. regs. He could have called me to inform but did this instead. I think I need to move..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, and OMG! I hope you can take action, report him to SPCA? Sue him for the vet cost? I’ve cooked renal care diets for dogs, I know diet can really help but I don’t know cats. I would be both livid and heartbroken. Some people, YIKES. xomo
Ashley Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Dear Maureen, your poem is such a potent little package of dynamite! Indeed, the potent sad truth of it.. your poetic expression as pointed as a rapier! A fav! Great title too.. Warmest wishes, my lovely.. ~Susan
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November 30, 2022 at 5:33 PM
Thank you so much Susan! My muse has been silent for a while where poetry is concerned, have tried to force it, that never works for me. This one burned it’s way out of me hat and fast. Stay you lovely! Warm hugs, xomo
Bauer Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:02 AM
so much wisdom in this little poem, maureen! great job...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 5:31 PM
Thank you lovely! xomo
Daniel Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 1:39 AM
Oh yeah! Words have that power to kill relationships, Maureen, well written:)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Jo! xomo
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