Light

a streak of sun
travels
in one window
out an another

in this i understand purpose

we live 
we die
hopefully
a bright light 
in someone`s life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 6:54 AM
You are brightening up the soup. Light up the room :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 7:00 AM
and you are the light.
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 8:03 AM
wow, this is what I call a meaningful itty bitty poem. Love it!!
Yvonne Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Andrea your words are really nice thank you. maurice
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 3:15 AM
I adore the sentiment in this poem especially in the final stanza - also a smile or a simple 'hello' from a person can also brighten up someones day. Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 8:12 AM
you are right Jan. the sentiment in this small piece fits you well.thank you for your hugs and love.
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