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Written 30 March 2025

Light or Shadows Poetry Contest

Sonsored by Suzette Richards

‘I was born with the meaning of home running through my veins.’ - Lauren Eden ************************************************************** Light with home rule in my veins paternal care not vain words motherly hug a retreat sisterly smiles like rays of sunshine the mind free to wander like the breeze early to rise a routine offering devotions a sheer joy the glow of inner light now illumines my journey of life goads me to the rightful path ever keeps me company as a benign guardian as I steadily trail my footsteps during the midday sunshine in the solemn silence of sunset alongside solitary moonlit footpaths and in the darkness of night when I retreat home to lay my head back on my pillow

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2025 10:25:00 PM

Oh you did this so well I didn't even think to add the word light into my poem.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/1/2025 1:06:00 PM

yes, once you understand it, it IS easy, I just feel stupid that I did not mention light inside mine!!

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/1/2025 1:11:00 AM

Thank your, dear poetess, for visiting my page and appreciating the poem. It`s my first attempt at Suzette Prime. Somehow I was not drawn to it, but now realise that it is much easier than other poetry forms. Wish you a blessed day.