Notes About The Poem

This poem uses and experimental 'Goblet' Poetry Form with a cup (the substance), a stem (pithy reflections) and a base (conclusion)

The Cup - develops the theme, viewpoints, arguments, ideas
5 lines => 9,8,7,6,5 syllables
The Stem - pithy phrases, short sharp adage, paradox, or questioning
6 lines => 4,3,2,1,1,1 syllables
The Base - conclusion, resolution, epilogue
2 lines => 4,7 syllables

sip

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Lifting the glass to sip from cupped hands

The cup rests warm in the bearer's hands inviting a swirl fragrant sniff to savor the wine, palm cupped a pause before drinking raising glass to lips tilting the cup heavenwards to taste head laid back acquiescent in ritual revelry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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La France Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 4:17 AM
John, another beauty in your created form, lovely, beautiful words and music, a fav ~
Anderson Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 9:34 AM
WOW - thanks very much for your kind words. Cheers and Best Wishes for the new Year
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 5:08 PM
It must be like that! Prost,
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