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Lifting the Fog

Lifetimes have past from those days of long ago Inching to be what we were, now understandably slow For such memories, such memories, engulfed in our sin To imagine their thoughts, to begin their begin Idiots, imbeciles, superlatives they were not Never knowing the destruction they would cause Gallantly pushing the button, our worlds now in pause The viewing I now view, contradicts who we are How can alleged intelligence be whom we breathe Encircled we are, formed we wreathe For it's against the against, what matters so Out there are many, each other through their eyes Going against each others grain, so we despise .

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Date: 11/24/2014 5:45:00 AM
intriguing thoughtfully written...
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James Fraser
Date: 11/24/2014 10:43:00 AM
Oh my! back to my deep thinking again, James ;-)
Date: 7/10/2014 3:51:00 PM
Wow! James! Outstanding write! Good luck in the contest my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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James Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Arlene. My poem 'Before the Fog' is 'Lifting the Fog' backwards. Thanks kindly for your always kind words, James :) x
Date: 7/4/2014 3:06:00 PM
Im so happy to be here and able to read your poetry.Very clever and truthful write James,Indeed lots to ponder about.
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James Fraser
Date: 7/4/2014 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, I always appreciate your comments, always, James .......
Date: 7/4/2014 3:04:00 PM
this will do really well in the contest for its unique take on the theme. Hugs Jan xxx
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