Lifted

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The fog lifted then the clouds parted A ray of sunlight glowed The Japanese Magnolia's blossoms Drooped put on a show A mood altering change, the sun removes doom from the day Reveals chores needing to be done But high emotions stay

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2015 6:24:00 PM

sara, tell me a tanka of yours to read that is not entered in my contest. I am worried to click on the one you may have entered in my contest, and I can't find a recent poem or yours to comment on!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2015 6:50:00 PM

I love when the sun lifts fog and other gloom from our day .you emulated the pictures with your imagery.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2015 5:01:00 PM

love these descriptions, my friend. Don't bother visiting my page as I only posted a poem for your contest

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/15/2015 11:07:00 AM

Beautiful piece... our vision is shrouded at times until the light shines and clears the fog... hugs, nad

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/15/2015 4:38:00 AM

Aha u Captured the fog and the parting of it with your poetic camera of pen ink. It is awesome to read , written exquisitely. Great to read u again poetess.