Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Lifted

The fog lifted then the clouds parted
A ray of sunlight glowed
The Japanese Magnolia's blossoms
Drooped put on a show

A mood altering change, the sun
removes doom from the day
Reveals chores needing to be done
But high emotions stay  

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Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2015 at 6:24 PM sara, tell me a tanka of yours to read that is not entered in my contest. I am worried to click on the one you may have entered in my contest, and I can't find a recent poem or yours to comment on!

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2015 at 6:50 PM I love when the sun lifts fog and other gloom from our day .you emulated the pictures with your imagery.

Jack Horne March 15, 2015 at 5:01 PM love these descriptions, my friend. Don't bother visiting my page as I only posted a poem for your contest

Poesy Relish March 15, 2015 at 11:07 AM Beautiful piece... our vision is shrouded at times until the light shines and clears the fog... hugs, nad

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 15, 2015 at 4:38 AM Aha u Captured the fog and the parting of it with your poetic camera of pen ink. It is awesome to read , written exquisitely. Great to read u again poetess.

Skat A March 14, 2015 at 8:22 PM always a pleasure to read your poems. Sara. Have a nice day. SKAT

Kim Merryman March 14, 2015 at 7:04 PM I enjoyed reading your poem, Sara! Great write! Love, Kim

Edward Ebbs March 14, 2015 at 6:59 PM Nice wrire, and so true...sometimes we need the light to shine on things to help us see what needs to be done :)

Jan Allison March 14, 2015 at 4:05 PM Brilliant imagery Sara I felt my spirits lift when I read this just like out mood lightens when the sun shines:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx