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Lifetree

Crimson veins rooted, olive leaves vented beneath bluest canopy.

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Yann Rolland

September 25, 2025 at 2:52 PM

great metaphor, and musical sentence too, enjoyed a lot

I Am Anaya

September 26, 2025 at 4:06 PM

Yann, musical is a good thing. Delighted you enjoyed! Bonne nuit, poète

CayCay Godwin

September 25, 2025 at 8:24 AM

Succulent imagery, Anaya, very well done. Don't know if it placed, doesn't matter, it's good.

I Am Anaya

September 25, 2025 at 10:17 AM

ThankxX I haven't entered contests of late, very busy...I liked the concept of rhyming title with last word in a oneliner. May do more of these CayCay , )

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 24, 2025 at 1:28 PM

Dear Anaya, I love how you use color and nature to describe something so deep and alive. It's a true aspect of the powerful life all around us. Blessings, Anaya, Daniel

I Am Anaya

September 25, 2025 at 10:29 AM

The imagery above surfaced and stirred emotions so deeply rooted in the fecund depths of my soul. Dear Daniel, life is precious, blessings and ThankxX!

Paige Hind

September 23, 2025 at 5:29 PM

Like this a lot - wow, sure fits

I Am Anaya

September 24, 2025 at 9:20 AM

Thankx Paige!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

September 22, 2025 at 1:30 PM

Interesting! Right and beautiful write! I love olive trees :-) Hugs xx AA

I Am Anaya

September 22, 2025 at 5:03 PM

I wish I had one , or at least an avocado tree. Lol. I chose the olive tree for It's enduring nature, resilience, and symbolic significance . Everlasting life.

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2025 at 9:22 AM

Love your "Lifetree" write and pretty picture. Both Beautiful.... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........

I Am Anaya

September 22, 2025 at 5:01 PM

Paula, I used the significance of the evergreen olive tree and everlasting lifetree

Duke Beaufort

September 22, 2025 at 4:50 AM

They are beautiful trees in their own right and your poem and the window pay homage to them. We're very lucky to have these wonderful trees and fruit. Smiles!!

I Am Anaya

September 22, 2025 at 4:57 PM

A mosaic window & the olive tree. It's enduring nature, resilience, and symbolic significance . Everlasting life.

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