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Sunshine Kisses good earth Friends for life since their birth Their friendship for all eternity Gives mirth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/16/2017 8:34:00 AM
Beautiful, Sara:) simple and true, well penned:)
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Date: 12/11/2017 3:19:00 PM
Sara you are so right. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:46:00 AM
Indeed ... so beautiful....
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Date: 10/15/2017 1:55:00 PM
I liked when you said... "Sunshine Kisses good earth" and that's true in every sense...Enjoyed it...Have a lovely Sunday evening
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Date: 10/14/2017 2:00:00 AM
What a beautifully well crafted and integrated write here my friend! I just loved the way you wove into your poem the lifelong friendship of the sun and the Earth! They were created at the same time, and they have always been the best of friends...but don't forget the moon! He always gets left out in the cold, to be alone in the dark! The moon is my muse! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious piece this morning! What an ingenious poem, Great Work my friend!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:18:00 AM
Russell, I was thinking along the lines of a romantic relationship in this work and the earth and sun are only metaphors for people..Yes, the earth and moon have a very important relationship...Our grandson was saying that the dark side and light side of the moon this week looked like someone took a straight edge ruler and drew the line onto it..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 10/13/2017 8:52:00 PM
Such a sweet and beautiful write, and so true!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:16:00 AM
Arthur, Your comment is much appreciated ...I am so glad that you chose my poem to read as one of the poems that you read..Sara
Date: 10/13/2017 12:18:00 PM
wonderful, and I like how you rhymed it. I don't think they need to be rhymed, right?
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 8:09:00 AM
Andrea, No the cinquain doesn't need to be rhymed but it just happened that way..I posted it on a site where it had to five lines and theme Friendship the rhyming just happened..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 10/13/2017 12:00:00 PM
A joy to read--lust a lovely, sweet poem!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:15:00 AM
Vijay, Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment..