Lifetime Friends

Sunshine

Kisses good earth
   
Friends for life since their birth

Their friendship for all eternity

Gives mirth

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Valsa George

Date: 2/7/2023 7:53:00 AM

Beautiful, Sara ! I love it. Yes, an eternal friendship!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/7/2023 9:05:00 AM

Valsa, I see you went into the past to view a poem. I am surprised myself when I see some of my old ones. So good some bad. Your visits bedazzle me. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/16/2017 8:34:00 AM

Beautiful, Sara:) simple and true, well penned:)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/11/2017 3:19:00 PM

Sara you are so right. have a nice day my friend.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/16/2017 9:46:00 AM

Indeed ... so beautiful....

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/15/2017 1:55:00 PM

I liked when you said... "Sunshine Kisses good earth" and that's true in every sense...Enjoyed it...Have a lovely Sunday evening

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/14/2017 2:00:00 AM

What a beautifully well crafted and integrated write here my friend! I just loved the way you wove into your poem the lifelong friendship of the sun and the Earth! They were created at the same time, and they have always been the best of friends...but don't forget the moon! He always gets left out in the cold, to be alone in the dark! The moon is my muse! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious piece this morning! What an ingenious poem, Great Work my friend!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:18:00 AM

Russell, I was thinking along the lines of a romantic relationship in this work and the earth and sun are only metaphors for people..Yes, the earth and moon have a very important relationship...Our grandson was saying that the dark side and light side of the moon this week looked like someone took a straight edge ruler and drew the line onto it..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/13/2017 8:52:00 PM

Such a sweet and beautiful write, and so true!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:16:00 AM

Arthur, Your comment is much appreciated ...I am so glad that you chose my poem to read as one of the poems that you read..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2017 12:18:00 PM

wonderful, and I like how you rhymed it. I don't think they need to be rhymed, right?

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 8:09:00 AM

Andrea, No the cinquain doesn't need to be rhymed but it just happened that way..I posted it on a site where it had to five lines and theme Friendship the rhyming just happened..Thanks for stopping by..Sara