"life's Witness"

As a soul departs
leaves in two sole a witness
one of grace or scorn

For: STILL LIFE
Sponsored by: Raul Moreno
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 20, 2010 at 7:57 PM
Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in this contest... most inspiring and a great win to add your your growing poetry portfolio... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 20, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Still Life John. Love, Carol
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April 20, 2010 at 12:47 AM
Congrats on your win, dear John. All the best, Iolanda
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April 19, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations John on your third place in Raul's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James
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April 19, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Awesome poem, John. Don't know how I missed it earlier. Congratulations on your win in the contest. You are on a roll to victory, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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April 19, 2010 at 12:34 PM
John, congratulations with you third place win in my contest...Raul
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April 17, 2010 at 11:51 PM
GOOD WRIE YOU HAVE HERE JOHN... ENJOYED
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April 17, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment John.Rgds Brian
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