Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

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Life's Vicious Game --

Shall we 
grate hours in tinge of pale?

Dear Life,  let me request,
The tiny stars to dance away
Above the moonlit crest.
Yet longing hands  and warm embrace 
Can't fill his icy space--
How one-way is this love
As I go     falling out of grace.


4/10/2016
Silent One’s Contest
Images That Make You Think  #2

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Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2016 at 9:34 PM Nette, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 16, 2016 at 5:15 AM Magnificent write nette .. congrats on great win!

Dineen Williams Gault April 15, 2016 at 11:03 AM I'm back to say congratulations for this well deserved win!

Laura Leiser April 14, 2016 at 9:35 PM I really liked your poetic take on this picture, Nette! Congrats on your win:)

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2016 at 7:16 PM Glad to see this with a big win, Nette. Congratulations to you.

Brian Davey April 14, 2016 at 5:50 PM Very well penned Nette, congratulations

Daniel Turner April 14, 2016 at 5:37 PM Back again to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, nette. Such an award winning write. Peace dear friend:)

Daver Austin April 14, 2016 at 11:30 AM Yes. Including man as, really, of the animal family, the panorama is hard to understand. War is insanity, so the slaying of animal by animal. Your usual thought provoker, dear nette

Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2016 at 8:46 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Nette - (I has not had time to read so much poetry in recent days (see my blog) .... sorry :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 11, 2016 at 3:03 AM Beautifully executed with masterful impact to tug at emotions Nette. Awe inspiring my friend! #7 ; ) Connie Marcum Wong April 11, 2016 at 3:04 AM Oh, I didn't know this received POTD! Congratulations Nette! ; )

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 10, 2016 at 5:09 PM Congratulations on the POTD. My best wishes for the contest.

Afolabi Muideen April 10, 2016 at 2:35 PM Congratulations for being featured.........A.M.

Tim Smith April 10, 2016 at 10:51 AM a lamp of silence drained...a remarkable image nette...congrats on being featured today

Afolabi Muideen April 10, 2016 at 8:11 AM Thank for sharing this gem, congrats for being featured.........A.M.

Paul Callus April 10, 2016 at 7:43 AM The slaughter of the innocent...for egoistic pleasure and gain. You talk of a very sad reality, Nette....it's always good to draw attention to it. Congrats on POTD...hugs // paul

Moon Flower April 10, 2016 at 7:29 AM A well-written piece, Nette. And congrats on POTD! Hugs.

Charlie Smith April 10, 2016 at 7:28 AM Congratulations Nette on POTD. Well done...

Daniel Turner April 10, 2016 at 6:58 AM Back to say Congratulations on POTD. I commented earlier. Peace my friend:)

Dineen Williams Gault April 10, 2016 at 4:17 AM Yes, why oh why snuff out a beautiful creature just for sport? So eloquently penned, such strength in your words! This was fabulous!

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2016 at 10:02 PM You really captured the essence of this challenge. Love the tone of this piece. By the way, I googled that picture first time I saw it, and was amazed to see it called an elephant!! (I think that is what it said)

Constance La France April 9, 2016 at 9:06 PM Nette, fantastic write, it made me want to weep, you captured the senseless slaughter of God's precious creatures, wonderful 7 +++

Matthew Anish April 9, 2016 at 6:28 PM This image definitely makes you think. We must not let new species become extinct, Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Rhoma Em April 9, 2016 at 6:18 PM I love the contemplative spirit of this mighty poem--- something that can't be exactly seen but felt, yet man's savagery exists; poor animals! Your talent is inexhaustible!

Daniel Turner April 9, 2016 at 5:42 PM So eloquent, Nette. I suppose greed is a dark stain on humanity. I love your interpretation. Good luck my friend:)