Life's Twists and Turns

At the tender age of twenty-three
    Carl took his leave of family

  He'd put his stock in friends, he said
    One year later, happily wed

  Life was easy, an ocean breeze
    His siblings, Carl loved to tease

  Mocking their holiday get-togethers
    He toasted his friends in Vegas weather

  The years passed, memories faded
    Carl and his wife fully persuaded

  They'd done the right thing, sans regrets
    Although no children did they beget

  But Carl took ill, then his wife left him
    Life took a U-turn... painful... grim...

  Distant memories of a caring home
    Awakened Carl's nostalgia zone

  So despite himself, Carl picked up the phone
    ~ Family long gone, address unknown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 11:12 AM
The ending makes me sad as I have a close family member who may end up like this.
Hawkins Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Oh! Dear So sad. Carl and his wife were a little selfish; they seemed to be two of a kind if his wife left him because she did not want the responsibility of looking after her sick husband. How presumptious of Carl to think his siblings' had not moved on. It's a sad situation for many reasons. Thank you, Gershon, I enjoyed reading this
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:03 PM
So glad you liked this one, Shirley, even if it was a bit sad... Appreciate all of your support. ~ Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 12:56 PM
Sad. There are some people in this world like that for sure. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my pages. Sara
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:07 PM
There sure are people like this, unfortunately. Thanks, Sara. :) gw
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Hello Gershon, I do not feel sorry for Carl. He should of stayed in touch with the family. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 11:13 AM
Hello Gershon, yes stayingin touch with family is important. Thank you Gershon. Enjoy your day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:09 PM
You are so right, Darlene. Staying in touch is the least one can do for one's family. Sweetness and Light, Gershon
Tor Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Heartfelt piece Gershon. Life can throw you a curve ball got to adapt and have lots of friends they are always a comforting source... Well written my friend...
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:11 PM
This one was a curveball and a sinker rolled into one. (Or should I call it a 'stinker?') ~ Pepe Le P.U.
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Ha! Sadly true, or maybe he's just lucky. laf
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:17 PM
I hear you about Carl being 'just lucky,' Linda. Interesting angle there. Thanks, gw
Lawless Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:41 AM
....the ultimate NO VACANCY sign
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:22 PM
No one's home -- NO Trespassing -- Go away. Triple whammy.
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