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This is a non-contest poem. It is solely written to improve poetic muse.

Beneath the stars, the threads are spun, A web of whispers, one by one. Through fleeting days, we seek the light, Life’s loom weaves shadows into sight. The rivers sing in silver streams, Reflecting hopes, refracting dreams. Each wave, a moment’s fragile flight, Life’s loom weaves shadows into sight. The winds that dance in twilight’s glow Remind us all we’ll come and go. Eternal skies hold truths contrite, Life’s loom weaves shadows into sight. Through storms we rise, through calm descend, A spiral journey without end. In every thread, the dark and bright, Life’s loom weaves shadows into sight.

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Date: 2/3/2025 8:35:00 PM
"The winds that dance in twilight’s glow Remind us all we’ll come and go. " Yes, the wind and waves speak of the ephemerality of life. Through ups and downs, life flows and we learn to survive even through defeats. Very philosophical.
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Date: 1/28/2025 2:52:00 AM
Very good, Jay:)
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Date: 1/26/2025 1:03:00 PM
Very well-crafted poem, Jay. Enjoyed reading it
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Date: 1/26/2025 12:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading. A wonderful write. Keep up the great work. Have a blessed week writing away.............
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Date: 1/26/2025 10:49:00 AM
Very pretty this is
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