Life's Sweetest Fruit, Hangs Withered On the Vine

~     Passionate, sweet, true ...


                           yet no other,


                 finds this heart ... of worth.     ~

lifelonelinesslovemetaphorfree verse

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Caren Krutsinger

August 13, 2018 at 11:04 PM

A gorgeous write. If we could all have a passionate sweet true heart, everyone would find us worthy.

Gregory Richard Barden

August 13, 2018 at 11:31 PM

You are very kind, Caren, and YOU have such a heart ... thank you so much for the sweet comment, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

August 13, 2018 at 1:07 PM

Awesome title, Gregory. As for the poem - I find that very hard to believe... as hard to believe as it is lovely.

Gregory Richard Barden

August 13, 2018 at 11:30 PM

That's very sweet of you, Line, I'm pleased you liked it, and I wish it weren't true ... yet here I sit, another night alone. I have loved deeply, and found two soulmates when some people never find one, so I am blessed to have known that, but I squandered it all, and now I pay the price. It makes for good poetry, though. ;-) Blessings, friend. <3

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