Life's soundtrack

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Awesome sunset, silence talks, only the birds' soundtrack on. A huge red sun sinks into the sea, the horizon is the artist painting different pictures to admire. What a magnificent show our nature offers to our eyes!. The dream of living is real while we can contemplate what it touches our depths. When nothing moves our interior, we are just flesh and bones walking around as chickens with no head. Changes make us different people. Most of the time we fall into deep pits instead of seeing what is around us, or harvesting something better to collect and feel ourselves more satisfied. Listen to your life's soundtrack, be the main character in this performance where you only have one chance.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2024 8:14:00 AM

What a wonderful write/pretty picture. A great ending... Have A Great Day Writing Away............................

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/3/2024 11:05:00 AM

Thank you very much dear Paula for your comment. Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/30/2024 10:21:00 PM

Deep thoughts. Zombies have no intelligence and roam around. Human beings know right from wrong. Their actions lead them to their destinations. In the end you have only one chance.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/31/2024 1:00:00 AM

Totally agree Victor. We travel to the evolution which means destruction of our planet after ourselves, because as human beings, we are nearly destroyed. My friend, thanks for passing by. Have a nice sunny day!

Christina Bowring

Date: 5/30/2024 9:38:00 AM

Dear Maria, I love this beautiful poem - it’s so profound and the picture and soundtrack works so well alongside your delightful poem. It’s a very reflective read with stunning imagery, ‘ huge red sun’ that captivates the reader. ‘ the horizon is the artist’ such a great line! I love the message here within its poetic lines - how true that we are not always aware of the beauty of our surroundings’ listen to your life’s soundtrack’ Sound advice. This was a real treat to read.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/30/2024 1:08:00 PM

Dear Christina, I always love your uplifting messages. How nice you are!. Yes, I love nature very much, I think we are misunderstanding the meaning of our presence here. It's hard to say that sometimes we just realise about these things when life put us on the rink. I love to listen to the birds now so excited because they can feel the good weather. You know Chris, thank you so much for being there all the time. I know, I don't know you, but It looks like we had a tea together today. Have a great evening my dearest friend. Love/María

Christina Bowring
Date: 5/30/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thank you my dear, sweet friend. Hugs to you xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/28/2024 8:29:00 AM

Dear Maria, You have eloquently captured the profound beauty of nature's spectacle and the introspective journey it inspires. I Loved how the imagery of the sunset sinking into the sea paints a picture of awe and wonder. Your words embrace life's changes and be present in our own stories. Truly inspiring work! - Blessings, Daniel

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/28/2024 12:39:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comment Daniel. Have a good afternoon. Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/28/2024 7:23:00 AM

At the edge of nowhere, we are given just one chance. Grab that safety of life. Great metaphor.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/28/2024 12:39:00 PM

Thank you very much Victor. Blessings!