Lifes Rollercaster

When life has the ability of turning sour
                                          don`t feel disheartened,down or cower
                                          because life on our rollercoaster is no easy ride
                                          we go up,sideways then the occasional slide

                                           If we take onboard most or of our mistakes 
                                           the  ride eases up and gives you a break
                                           just so that you can gather your thoughts
                                           to whatever you may have bought

                                           If you go through your life with a smile,more politer
                                           you won`t go far wrong,and your day will be brighter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Benson Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Yes! life can most times be based on our attitudes and thoughts towards it. Beautiful write, Paul.
Eastman Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Well said. Very interesting. Enjoyable style.
Brown Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:19 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Paul. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Susan Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 6:51 AM
nice write. very positive and uplifting. welcome to the soup :)
Falotico Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Nice write on rebounding in life.... welcome my friend....Michael
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June 12, 2011 at 12:01 PM
PAUL, LIFE WHAT A RIDE.. A SMILE A DAY WILL BRIGHTEN ANY DIM LIGHT,,, THANKS FOR SHARING,..LINDA
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