Lifes Mysteries

Life’s a river; reading riddles it flows.
In morn, he crawls, tiptoeing like a leech, 
Falling - kneeling, crawling in fours, he goes,
Enters he second stage, all love to reach,
Swiftly rising, in twos he walks, cooing   
Mysteries of life and gaily, dancing;
Yet seeing only scenes that do wooing,
Steadily he runs, glancing and prancing; 
Thereby, not seeing the tragic down fall,
Enters he his third stage and walks on threes,
Rising sky high but beginning to crawl 
In vast pool of sea, being lulled by breeze. 
Every step he keeps, mysteries he meets, 
Sounding, silent; merrily all he greets.


ALL YOURS (Jan 29) Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Brian Strand

*A 4th Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 31, 2020)

Syllable count: 10 syllables in each line (Ref: https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter
Rhyming scheme: ABAB CDCD EFEF GG

Dec. 5, 2020
Lifes mysteries Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: John Hamilton 


Inspiration from Sophocles' King Oedipus and my own poem “Life is a River” (published in 2016)
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Koplin Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Hamilton Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Thanks Newton for your entry, congrats on placing!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much, John, for the congrats!!
Proxenos Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Newton this a beautiful Acrostic and I am almost certain this will be a top win, the poem certainly deserves the recognition! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Thank you so much, Jennifer, for this impressively lovely comment and the encouraging complement!!
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 3:48 AM
- A great Acrostic poem, Newton ... Acrostic is not easy ... but yours is excellent - Best wishes in the contest, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 3:51 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this so sweet comment and the complement!!
Dutta Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Good Approach. All the best.
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Thank you so much, Anisha, for your visit and this sweet comment!!
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