Life's Measure

I die … without a fight … yet not conceding
But gently, as the world around me ages
Rescinding gift of health, each sense receding
As life escapes me, in retreating stages

Perhaps beyond this chapter lies conclusion
Or if another chapter, maybe better
Yet maybe, this is but a Grand Illusion
If so, I’m glad we were deceived together

When I am gone I hope you will remember
That life became us and our time on earth
I know that I will keep one thought forever
That you became the measure of my worth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Brian, you just have the gift of writing deep, insightful pieces in such a captivating way! I wish I could write as profoundly as you do! BRAVO! Hugs. Pandita
Densham Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Pandita. I've only read some of your work and I can already see that you have a gift. Brian
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