Life's Little Secret

I never really realized How crucial friends can be I used to think that one or two Would be enough for me But now I think I'm changing How I view this need to share The good things and the heartaches With ones who really care We moved here from the city With a group of folks like us To wile away our golden years To relax and avoid the fuss Since moving to this paradise I'm now a different man I welcome conversations Bout neighbours and their plans To share each other's happiness And cry when losing one We're all so very much alike No matter where we're from It's not a competition To see who wins the prize It's all about companionship To feel the bonds that tie Now if I were just to count them There'd be twenty-five I'm sure Some more close than others But all of them top drawer So if you see me walking tall And whistling a happy tune It's because I've found my paradise No more doom and gloom © Jack Ellison 2014
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March 3, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Love the lightheartedness but with a message. When you think about it, perhaps, that's what retirement is all about--time for friends and activities you love. I'm being stingy with my time unless it's something I love. Few long meetings for me. I'm a newbie and so good to find lots of people who also enjoy writing "just for the fun of it"
Ellison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Welcome, welcome, welcome!!! You will love it here! I've been a member since 2012 with no intentions of ever leaving until... LOL Thanks for dropping by with your kind words and I hope this is just the first of many conversations! Once again, WELCOME!!! Love, Jack xxx
Timperley Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:59 AM
To this poem I can relate Jack. We took early retirement and a flight out to Cyprus to leave the rat race behind. Enjoying God's pleasure now, hopefully for many more years now the pressure is off. God Bless. D.
Ellison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Always was a very active dude so wasn't sure what retirement would be like! Still worked till I was 75! Was a graphic designer and I LOVED it! That was five years ago and still dabble a bit for a couple of clients but very little... I still miss it! Cheers!
Adams Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 3:04 PM
A Delightful Read, Jack. An easy seven. Write on!
Ellison Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 3:20 PM
You dug down deep for this one my friend! Thanks for the big 7! Cheers from the frozen north!!!
Goswami Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Bah...Very good thoughts Sir...I appreciated and enjoyed...Best wishes from India...
Ellison Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 4:30 PM
A great big thank you from Canada, my good friend! Cheers!
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 10:21 AM
I enjoyed your poem my dear friend Jack. Thanks for sharing from your heart. Take care! Hugs! Love and blessings! xxx D.
Ellison Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 10:47 AM
I look forward to your comments EVERY DAY!!! Don't go anywhere! Love and big hugs, Jack XXX
Eastman Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Doom and Gloom? Naw! You're an upbeat guy. Dragon and I loved this one. I've learned with Dragon to 'Carpe Diem' That's what my fun story poems are about. Suprising, But I can be a serious writer if I want to... But Hubby suggested Light and lively with lots of fun, is what this world needs. So with your help (letting me to play with your words) I've gotten ideas for Dragon. Thank you Jack. You're my favorite poet. Dragon agrees... Carpe Diem!It fits and I even saw it on a contest lately, too.
Ellison Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Just checked out the number of poems I've submitted to P-Soup... 1509!!! And I'm sure you've read almost ALL of them! Now that's a loyal friend! Love ya dear Carol XXXXX
Ellison Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 10:44 AM
You sure got that right, my dear Carol!!! Thank you sweet lady for the accolades, as always! Loving hugs XXXXX
Mcintosh Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 7:23 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Love and prayers, Gina
Ellison Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Thank you, dear Gina, for your sweet comment! Huggsies, Jack XXX
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