Life's Little Secret

I never really realized How crucial friends can be I used to think that one or two Would be enough for me But now I think I'm changing How I view this need to share The good things and the heartaches With ones who really care We moved here from the city With a group of folks like us To wile away our golden years To relax and avoid the fuss Since moving to this paradise I'm now a different man I welcome conversations Bout neighbours and their plans To share each other's happiness And cry when losing one We're all so very much alike No matter where we're from It's not a competition To see who wins the prize It's all about companionship To feel the bonds that tie Now if I were just to count them There'd be twenty-five I'm sure Some more close than others But all of them top drawer So if you see me walking tall And whistling a happy tune It's because I've found my paradise No more doom and gloom © Jack Ellison 2014
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Date: 3/3/2016 7:40:00 PM
Love the lightheartedness but with a message. When you think about it, perhaps, that's what retirement is all about--time for friends and activities you love. I'm being stingy with my time unless it's something I love. Few long meetings for me. I'm a newbie and so good to find lots of people who also enjoy writing "just for the fun of it"
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2016 5:56:00 AM
Welcome, welcome, welcome!!! You will love it here! I've been a member since 2012 with no intentions of ever leaving until... LOL Thanks for dropping by with your kind words and I hope this is just the first of many conversations! Once again, WELCOME!!! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 8/15/2015 7:59:00 AM
To this poem I can relate Jack. We took early retirement and a flight out to Cyprus to leave the rat race behind. Enjoying God's pleasure now, hopefully for many more years now the pressure is off. God Bless. D.
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Date: 8/15/2015 8:08:00 AM
Always was a very active dude so wasn't sure what retirement would be like! Still worked till I was 75! Was a graphic designer and I LOVED it! That was five years ago and still dabble a bit for a couple of clients but very little... I still miss it! Cheers!
Date: 2/24/2015 3:04:00 PM
A Delightful Read, Jack. An easy seven. Write on!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/24/2015 3:20:00 PM
You dug down deep for this one my friend! Thanks for the big 7! Cheers from the frozen north!!!
Date: 10/20/2014 2:45:00 PM
Bah...Very good thoughts Sir...I appreciated and enjoyed...Best wishes from India...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2014 4:30:00 PM
A great big thank you from Canada, my good friend! Cheers!
Date: 10/20/2014 10:21:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem my dear friend Jack. Thanks for sharing from your heart. Take care! Hugs! Love and blessings! xxx D.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2014 10:47:00 AM
I look forward to your comments EVERY DAY!!! Don't go anywhere! Love and big hugs, Jack XXX
Date: 10/20/2014 9:37:00 AM
Doom and Gloom? Naw! You're an upbeat guy. Dragon and I loved this one. I've learned with Dragon to 'Carpe Diem' That's what my fun story poems are about. Suprising, But I can be a serious writer if I want to... But Hubby suggested Light and lively with lots of fun, is what this world needs. So with your help (letting me to play with your words) I've gotten ideas for Dragon. Thank you Jack. You're my favorite poet. Dragon agrees... Carpe Diem!It fits and I even saw it on a contest lately, too.
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Date: 10/20/2014 11:01:00 AM
Just checked out the number of poems I've submitted to P-Soup... 1509!!! And I'm sure you've read almost ALL of them! Now that's a loyal friend! Love ya dear Carol XXXXX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/20/2014 10:44:00 AM
You sure got that right, my dear Carol!!! Thank you sweet lady for the accolades, as always! Loving hugs XXXXX
Date: 10/20/2014 7:23:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/20/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, dear Gina, for your sweet comment! Huggsies, Jack XXX
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